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    Valley

    A digital painting, just trying to improve

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    Where is the horizon line and vanishing points? The buildings seem off

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    Think they're off screen.. actually didn't think about that when I made it..

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    The building on the far left is out of perspective with the other two buildings. Also because of it's earthly tones, it's not immediately noticeable and varies very differently in architecture next to the red building. It might be best to get rid of that building altogether and work on the cliff behind it to create more depth to the piece. I think the clouds need to be a little softer next to the rocky pillars in the background too - maybe a little less blocky and a little more wispy, like the really high altitude clouds you can get. http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2428/...278758007c.jpg It would then fit in with the height of the rocks and blend in with the sky a bit better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MjTheHunter View Post
    Think they're off screen.. actually didn't think about that when I made it..
    Without them all of your perspective is off including the clouds and landscape.

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    I agree with above. Check out other tutorials on here to learn to render better.
    http://www.conceptartmasters.blogspot.com

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    Thanks guys, will look into that !

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