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    training 2d and 3d

    Hi everyone. I finally made it to conceptart))
    I'm the beginner so it would be great to receive some constructive criticism and feedback.

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    welcome bro
    nice start
    i would love to see more studies from you
    keep up

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    Thx) Trying my best xDD
    Sure thing I'm gonna post some soon.

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    First i tried to make something scary but this is what came out.

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    Hey is there any way to show the picture right to the sketchbook thread without changing the first picture?

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    just moving it down

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    another front view

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    another face

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    guuys need some crits

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    Looks like a short version of kriss.
    Well it was based on kriss's (kriss super v) recoil reduction system.

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    reference sheet

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    tried to make ink strokes over the regular shadows
    in the end it turned out bad)

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    training of the perspective

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    organic thing
    trying to improve lineart. my hand is not trained enough

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    I'm gonna finish it and add the body and the background. Wanna make her face as detailed as the eyes.
    Any ideas of how to improve it?

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    FORM IS MORE INPORTANT TAHN DETAILS MATE!!
    you're going for details on the bald chick up there
    while it simply looks totally awkward the her face is at a 3/4 position and still her eyes and everything else are the same way as if she was looking directly at us!
    things looks diferent from diferen't directions.
    and the ear looks shapeless

    grab some head ref pics (or anything) and draw the faces horrying more about the shape of tis features!

    work on details later

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    thanks for crits)
    3/4 is one of many things which I've got problems with.
    I've tried to correct ears, nose and lips but I still think that it's ok with eyes.
    any further advice?

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    training

    Long time no posting.
    i've started to draw backgrounds in perspective with two points.

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    hello! looks like your doing a good job, doing training and then making your own scenes and people with what you learn.

    I liek the gun too, it looks credible. Maybe design a holster for it? and some accessories like a folding stock etc. Uzi it up.

    The fish eye corridor looks really good, good ambient occlussion shadows round the skirting boards and where the ceiling joins the wall.

    your best bet with people is try to copy from reference exactly. trust the reference- if you build it up and shade it right, a person will pop out of the lines. its awesome seeing it happen.
    apart from that, just keep going, youre doing well and it only gets easier!

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    thanks)
    I need more practice. It's very far from the level I need.

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    gotta try something more difficult

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    practice

    some scans. cleaned up a bit

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    some stuff

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    practice 2

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    insert coin

    the result isn't as good as I wanted but I've learned a lot
    original size

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    Awesome

    Really fantastic start! I like your line style, when drawing the objects in your room! Given me the inspiration to draw anything in my room (hell of a mess that it is!), and the perspective digitals are awesome aswell!

    What program did you use for the Hammer Head machine pistol? Its an awesome concept!

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