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    Red face something I'm working on, suggestions and criticism appreciated

    A few things i was thinking could be happening here. One idea is for the light behind the two to be a sort of portal in which they stepped into, or possibly a futuristic fountain they are playing in, as the illustrator, I would like to know what you all think at first glance. All critiques welcome! please and thank you!
    sorry for the huge file earlier, I was in a rush

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    WAY TOO BIG. Scale it down as a courtesy and try again. Yes I know most browsers will rescale if you view just the image alone, but that's not the point. Save a separate scaled down version for posting like the rest of us do.

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    It's a nice dot. But that's as far as I'm willing to scroll

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    I do not blame you I feel slightly embarassed for uploading something that huge! critiques still welcome.

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    Without considering your verbal description, at first glance, the image looks to me like a couple of fellas going for a wade in a fountain, possibly filled with deadly acid, perhaps after a nice jog. The one guy is stretching out, while the other guy just remembered that he forgot to actually mail out all the thank you cards for his recent housewarming party.

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    It's rather confusing to tell you the truth. The guy in the back who is bent over looks like he's about to dive head-first into the liquid and the one standing up looks as though he just realized he forgot something, as wooblood pointed out. The picture would tell much more if the two characters were interacting. Perhaps if one looked angry at the other, or if one was helping the other stand up, it would look as though something interesting just happened and it's up to us to figure out what. Right now it makes little sense.

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    update :I

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