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    Thumbs up I need your critiques

    Hello All,

    Can I please ask for your critiques on the painting and background? This image was painted using corel painter 11 it is not a smudge painting. Is the background too busy? Is there more I can do what do you think? I don't mind what ever critiques be as bad as you want.

    http://www.pbase.com/mstmart/image/129300823/original


    Any reply would be much appreciated.

    Many thanks

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    Please post the image as an attachment so we can see it in the thread. It's oh so much more convenient

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    like he said attachment!

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    Are you using the smudge tool?

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    critiques

    Ok everyone I post the image again as suggested.

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    It's quite wonderful. The denim bothers me a little bit though. I swear I'm seeing smudge tool in some places. Just to clarify, are you saying you didn't use the smudge tool at all, or that you didn't start with a photo and just smudge it? Not that it's a big deal. I just think if you did use the tool, it didn't help. Still a really nice piece though!

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