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    Talking rookie

    [URL=http://www.tgoshay.com/elephant.html]hey this is my first post im hoping i get it right this time, feel free to look and critique

    grandma, dont!!!
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    Hi
    You got to use img button write url to the pic e.g http://www.tgoshay.com/elephant-man-copy.jpg
    rookie

    link to your site: tgoshay:s site

    Edit: PS: I guess you read the rules that the post must include pic, so that your intention not was just to write down your link.

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    Hey cool pic. THe line work on it is nice and so is the coloring, but i feel the head is not up to par with the rest of the image, which is a problem cuz the head is usualy the focal point. Here is my reasoning for my thoughts: the head lacks the depth/dimension that the rest of the character has and is also anatomical incorrect, even for a fantasy character, because the jaw/mandable is much longer than the upper mouth. If he were to shut his mouth there would be about a 3-4 inch under bit goin on. I think if you rework the head you could have a nice concept piece.

    Keep posting!

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    I agree with nardfrog on the head thing. doesn't look quite right. nice line work though. You've got some pretty cool stuff on ur website as well.

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    heres another.. I think

    thanks alot for the help guys, appreciate you looking at the site too...
    I'm just getting into the concept art thing, and its a lot of freaking work, but im up for it.[IMG]


    hope it works this time
    rookie

    Last edited by cyruse44; March 11th, 2004 at 12:55 AM.
    grandma, dont!!!
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