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[URL=http://www.tgoshay.com/elephant.html]hey this is my first post im hoping i get it right this time, feel free to look and critique
My sketchbook flawed to the max page 5
Ps:Hope you understand my English.
Remember my advices taste best with a grain of salt.
Hey cool pic. THe line work on it is nice and so is the coloring, but i feel the head is not up to par with the rest of the image, which is a problem cuz the head is usualy the focal point. Here is my reasoning for my thoughts: the head lacks the depth/dimension that the rest of the character has and is also anatomical incorrect, even for a fantasy character, because the jaw/mandable is much longer than the upper mouth. If he were to shut his mouth there would be about a 3-4 inch under bit goin on. I think if you rework the head you could have a nice concept piece.
BLAST ON YOU!
I agree with nardfrog on the head thing. doesn't look quite right. nice line work though. You've got some pretty cool stuff on ur website as well.
Eagles fly high, but weasels don't get sucked into jet engines.
thanks alot for the help guys, appreciate you looking at the site too...
I'm just getting into the concept art thing, and its a lot of freaking work, but im up for it.[IMG]
hope it works this time
Last edited by cyruse44; March 11th, 2004 at 12:55 AM.