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This is my first ever attempt at using oil paints, and one of my first still life's. I did this for a school project and painted from a photograph I took. I think some parts went well, but I know I can definitely improve, especially on the metal parts. So I would really appreciate some feedback/ critique on this, mainly on what parts are wrong and could be improved, how to improve the metal and general tips on handling oil paints, thanks
your values are in a very narrow range without a lot of variation. Try making the darks darker for depth.
The edges are sloppy. It is generally good to block everything in with a large brush, now pull out a finer brush and do the details. I'm not sure what the form is on the blue lego. A shoe?
Congrats on your first. Doing more black an white shading such as drawing will help you get an eye for values.
You might have better luck, since you're just starting out, to paint some bigger objects. Scaling up an object that much in a painting takes some really close observation, and quite simply ain't easy.
Robotus - Thanks, I will try to do that with my next one.
Yes it is a shoe, a monopoly piece, that's what I struggled the most with.
Thanks, I only really learnt about the starting loose and making it finer after I had finished, and because it was for school I only had 2 brushes, so it was really difficult to do that, but on my next one I will make sure I have enough brushes to paint like that, and then hopefully it should be more refined. But thanks for the advice
Noah - Yeah, I didn't have much choice on the subject this time, but next time I will choose bigger objects, thanks for the advice