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    Naidy: thanks a lot! ^__^ the albinos piece is not finished yet but I hope I'll finish it in a couple of months. I have a lot of free time now so I can draw.



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    Today I started a painting of a mermaid, trying to change the style... use more vibrant colors and more cartoonish look. There's a lot of work on that piece but I'm asking for some critique, maybe someone can tell me what I should change. =)

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    this is how does the work with albinos look like now. I feel that I must change something (the girl's arm for example) but I dunno what.



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    here's some new stuff I did today.

    though I drew a girl with a pig a few days ago.

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    some 2 minutes gesture sketches I did today using this gesture tool
    BTW it helps a lot. I'm going to do such sketches every day, 10 sketches take only 20 minutes but it really helps your improvement.

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    I absolutely love your character designs and color work. Everything in this sketch book is interesting to look at. My favorite is definitely the albinos, a simple red and white color scheme there looks brilliant and vibrant in it's own way. I hope I can do work half this good someday .

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    I absolutely love your character designs and color work. Everything in this sketch book is interesting to look at. My favorite is definitely the albinos, a simple red and white color scheme there looks brilliant and vibrant in it's own way. I hope I can do work half this good someday .

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    hey dawg, don't say you suck. I really love your style.

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    youre very good with pencil and painting. keep it up!

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    my subconscious does not stop begging my conscious to draw.
    hmm does that mean im a slave to my subconscious?
    at least it doesnt beg for crack. ha.
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    Very nice, please make more realistic female painting. It's awesome

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    Hi Bdawg: you ask for critics, but your work is so good! Great characters, lovely style!
    Keep it up

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    OK, I just thought of something. I don't think the mermaid's breasts would float that much.

    gosh, why do I keep going around critiquing breasts...

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    Hi guys and gals!

    here's my recent work, I think I'll work on it within a week or even more. I want to add a lot of details to it. it's my first attempt to draw steampunk and I want it to be one of my biggest and most detailed work... trying to work on my patience

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    love tank

    I absolutely love your character designs and color work. Everything in this sketch book is interesting to look at. My favorite is definitely the albinos, a simple red and white color scheme there looks brilliant and vibrant in it's own way. I hope I can do work half this good someday
    Hey man! Thanks a lot for these kind words. It's very inspiring for me to read comments like these. ^__^ I'm not sure about albinos color scheme. though I like it, I think that there're not enough colors... maybe I'll add some more later. thank you very much!


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    thank you very much guys! I'm very glad that I got that much feedback, I never had that on this site...
    and what about realistic female portraits... I think I'll do a couple of them but only as "warm up painting" or smth like that. I'm going to try something new, painting brutal guys, creatures, armor and other stuff because I feel like I'm stuck with that female portraits. I'm not bad at it but I need to go further.

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    OK, I just thought of something. I don't think the mermaid's breasts would float that much.

    gosh, why do I keep going around critiquing breasts...
    well maybe because breasts sometimes become a main focal point of the painting... and if there's anything not alright with them the whole painting looks like there's something wrong D:

    thank you very much for this critic, I completely agree with you! they look like balloons or balls... but on the other hand I seem to like them... dunno what to do

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    Great painting skills!you have a talent.just study more light and shadows.keep it up=)

    My sketchbook.

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    Looking good, you have a very unique style which I enjoy. Some fantastic character designs, too. Keep it going!

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    Hello guys. Thanks for all your feedback again!

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    just study more light and shadows.keep it up=)
    yeah you're right! light and shadows are my biggest problems. even bigger than color problem. but I'm working on it

    I think I've finished that last painting of a chibi girl with a piggy. Here's the result. Maybe I'll come back to it later, I'm not sure. Right now I just don't want to change anything.





    the bigger image is here on download button: http://kelso-san.deviantart.com/art/...kelso-san&qo=0

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    I went to the museum yesterday and this is my result:

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    and my boyfriend is playing "Tropico 3", sometimes they say that they found a llama with "EL PRESIDENTE" tattooed on her side or a llama approached to eat El Presidente's fave hat... this is kinda fanart of that llama.

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    and a tiny sketch commission which I did on deviantart:

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    this is my latest update of the albino circus image. maybe I'll add later some more details and consider it finished.
    BTW I'm going to change the crown cos it was a clipart image and I overpainted it too little -_____-



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    http://attachments.conceptart.org/fo...6&d=1295857455

    the painting above is sort of wrong. look at his face, and then at his hair. you either need to bring his face forward, or his hair back.


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    i like the NIN badge. :-) good composition and colouring too.

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    Love your SB, your studies are amazing! I really like the texture on those landscapes too. The albino painting is wicked, but I think it was better without the rainbow scarf and the crown, I think it detracts from it. Also I think the horses head need to come forward or the body back as it looks like they're on the same plane at the moment.

    But great body work, I'm not just talking about the mermaid

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    Nice. Just an opinion but on the albino circus thing I wouldnt give the horse such a colourful scarf, it kind of destroys the beauty of the white/red theme. Also in the commision pic the guys hair looks too high/too much volume. Lower it a bit and tone it down. Keep it up.

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    the painting above is sort of wrong. look at his face, and then at his hair. you either need to bring his face forward, or his hair back.
    thanks a lot for your comment! if only I could receive such critics before I've sent the sketch to client... anyway, it was so cheap that there was no sense to change anything.

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    The albino painting is wicked, but I think it was better without the rainbow scarf and the crown, I think it detracts from it. Also I think the horses head need to come forward or the body back as it looks like they're on the same plane at the moment.
    Thank you very very very much for this comment! I've changed everything as you said and now I feel quite happy with this painting. And the version with the crown and scarf made me feel miserable.

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    Nice. Just an opinion but on the albino circus thing I wouldnt give the horse such a colourful scarf, it kind of destroys the beauty of the white/red theme. Also in the commision pic the guys hair looks too high/too much volume. Lower it a bit and tone it down. Keep it up.
    yeah thanks a lot for this constructive critics! I've changed the scarf. And too high/too big hair on "emoguys" is one of my biggest problems... I draw low bottoms and too big hair -___- but I'll work on it and get rid of it. thank you!
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    here's an update on albinos stuff, I tried to consider all the critics I received. thanks to all of you guys! I think the image is finished now. maybe i'll clean up the chromatic aberrations, I don't know.

    also a HUGE thanks goes to a guy named ClaretCrab he helped a lot with composition.



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    here are some updates from me.

    2 tiny sketch commissions I did on deviantart
    my selfportrait
    and a portrait of my OC Herr O. he's a German director of adult movies.

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    Hi guys! Here are some new sketches.

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    Wow, I absolutely love your work!
    I wish I could give some useful critique, but for now I'm just amazed. Keep up the good work ♥


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    thanks a lot for your post! ^__^ and yeah. of course I'll draw more. prepare to find some critics for me


    hello again guys!

    I haven't updated my sketchbook for a huge amount of time because my dream came true and I found a job in game development! Now I'm a full-time 2D artist and I'm very happy about it. ^___^

    That's why I don't have much time to draw for myself. But I'm going to take part in Dominance War this year, that's why I'll have to find some time for personal drawing.

    Hope you're all doing good!

    and I'll definitely post some updates soon.

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    here's the drawing I'm working on recently. this guy's supposed to hold a huge and ridiculous gun.

    and yes, I want to finish at least one drawing with such haircut XD

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    here's some of my new stuff.

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    here's the gun I did for that guy in another file.
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    and here're some women I did for work.... concept stuff I suppose
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    Wow I love your work .. I do not have any critiques for it actually o_0

    I browsed through your deviantART too and I really liked this work http://kelso-san.deviantart.com/art/secret-184519979

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    Hey there! Brilliant work! I love it

    Expacially your drawing skill is very nice!
    How old are you?

    Greetings from Germany

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    Wow you style is so fantastic; excactly what I am aiming for once I have become a great artist!

    The only critique that I have is the breasts of the mermaid- yeah I get it, big boobs are supposed to be sexy or something like that, but especially in this picture they wouldn't hover on the water like that. WIth these very idealized breasts the picture loses a lot of depth IMHO.

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