Link to my previous sketchbook thread:
Diedra's sketchbook Vol. 1: July '07 - December '09
To start off, here are 2 'finished' pieces.
And here are some studies and sketches.
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and anatomical construction practice~
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a random sketch~
drawings from my local petting zoo~
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Glad to see you back. I see you got rid of the sheep on the first finished one. The petting zoo animals are pretty good - it's hard to draw animals as they don't stay still for very long.
Hey! Liking your use/study of basic shapes when it comes to complex forms. I think that's a really useful tool to study.
Your paintings are great, and while have next to zero knowledge when it comes to the technique of painting, I can say that the second 'finished' piece needs some more extreme lights and darks. The centaur one is very interesting to look at with the range of shades, and while the softness of the second one might be what you're going for, I feel like it doesn't leave quite the impact.
Hope to see more!
Very nice animal sketches/studies
And I love the way you've painted the centaur image. Keep it up!
Hey D, glad to see you're back on ca i have to say it really wasn't the same without you here. The Lutist came to a beautiful finish, all the details fit together so well making it one of your best pieces. The white dragon painting looks great and i still can't get over how your characters fit so harmoniously into their environments, for a crit it feels like the dragon's feet are a bit oddly placed, almost as if they vanish in the rock beneath the dragon, for a future painting you could have them fold in on themselves, kind of like how dogs or other four legged animals do when they sit. Amazing self portrait, i like the way your brush strokes give it a finished look without having to go deep into details. The still life's are great, especially the light bulb, it's really hard to paint glass so kudos to you
You certainly haven't been slacking in the studies department, i like the animals and anatomical construction studies. Great improvement on the facial studies, they are looking much betterer now
Its great to have you back D. and i'm looking forward to seeing more of your works.
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Thanks for the comments - I love your studies, they are very form and rythym oriented - your color pieces are also looking really nice, beautiful rendering.
Black Spot - Oh yeah, I forgot about the sheep At some point I just got tired of fiddling with them and I thought the image looked okay without them. I also realized that at that distance, they should really just be little white specks anyway. And yeah, drawing moving animals is tough, but it's great practice! You basically have to draw the form from memory and just look at them for help with details and stuff.
ZombieGrub - I can totally see what you mean; I can see that that image has a lower value range now that you mention it. Thanks for the crit!
Elz - Thanks, I will!
miycko - You're referring to the dragon's back legs, right? Yeah I wasn't really sure what to do about that. I tried having that foot visible next to the belly but I thought it looked really stupid. I'm still not sure what I should have done differently, but it's my goal to get better at animal antomy once I've concquered human anatomy (lol, like that'll ever happen ). And I'm glad to hear your like my brush strokes; I've really been feeling lately like that's a weak point in my work. Like especially in the self-portrait, the rendering feels choppy and awkward to me. I think the brush I use is good for laying down the foundation for the image, but it's not very good for blending. I should try to find something better.
Saramel - Thank you!
This is the painting I'm currently working on. The stuff in the back is (supposed to be) a stained glass window.
These are some WIPs I hope to finish next.
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And here's some more anatomical construction stuff.
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I love how smooth your pictures turn out when you colour them!
As for the stained glass though, this tends to have a dappled effect, What's the direction of the light in your picture?
Anyways, this might be a good refference for the texture. http://www.trendir.com/archives/dani...ined-glass.jpg
The woman in it looks lovely though so keep up the good work.
Hey hey, thanks for stopping by! Nice studies! All your digitals look sooo smooooth , I haven't done anything in photoshop yet, but maybe try some textural stuff for fun? That's just my 2 cents though, keep it up!
The cloth in your WIPs is brilliant. All of them look like interesting projects.
Naidy - Oh yeah, right now I'm kinda putting off adding the texture of the glass until I get the design of the window worked out. I haven't really thought much about the light direction (I presume you mean, what direction the light is hitting the window?) or how I'm going to do the texture.. I've never done stained glass before so I'll probably have to do some small tests to figure out what works best. Thanks for the help!
Lang Oulk - You're right, texturing stuff should definitely be had; thanks for making the suggestion!
tobbA - I think I see what you mean. I've been rather loathe to grapple textures so far, but it sounds like it's something I need to start dealing with. I'm thinking about taking some time in the near future to do some studies specifically regarding texture and style to figure out how to best deal with the issue. Thanks for the critique!
Rotor - Thank you, and I will!
Black Spot - Aw thanks girl; I really appreciate the encouragement. Some days, your comments help to make me feel like I can really do this
Small update this week. I was bored so I started reworking this other half-started piece I had sitting around. I decided to go back to a different thumb and take the image in a different direction.
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