Hello to everyone, i would like feedback for a t-shirt design to be used at a BFA review at my school. Basically, i need to show my design capabilities at junior level to be considered for fine arts degree. The concept of the design is "Coexistence" or living in harmony with others disregarding race, religion, gender, ethnicity, etc. I have two designs to show, both are meant to deliver the message with simplicity and i want to include the word "coexistence" in both. Any feedback, positive or negative, is welcome.
Thank you for the time