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    The World Weaver

    something im working up for a book. not finished of course but generally its close. Just wanted to hear others thoughts.

    about the image.

    This is an alien that weaves planets into existence that can hold life and warps them into other solar systems with black holes (a take on god sort of).

    the alien needed to look humanoid but also made out of or enhanced with super cool graphics card techyness

    Id like too hear others thoughts. Thanks!

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    That's pretty nifty.

    I think you need to put him ENTIRELY in front of the object behind him. The clouds taking over his form make him a difficult read as well as provide the viewer with a lot of confusion concerning depth.

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    Hey thanks Quigleyer! Yeah that's been the consistent comment from other people as well. Im just going to pull it down abit so to see his torso.

    Thanks again!

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    I think you need to put more quality into the green line stuff he's doing. The "techo-stuff" in the ceiling and floor and in the glowing walls are so great, then the stuff he's doing kinda looks like doodles on the back of someone's notebook. They need to be more techno-y. I would also think about darkening the foreground and letting the background(with the character) pop more. Maybe add more depth to the planet/wormhole/anomaly area, right now they look as if they are all about the same distance away from the figure, perhaps by darkening some of the space near the center.

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    Thanks Mike! Yeah there some things I need to figure out with the green line treatments. Im going to add more panels and controller looking screens and stuff soon.

    My original posted image has a a few adjustment filters slapped on top of it too get the colors and exposure to the directors liking. Here is the image without the filters (my unaltered painting)

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