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    Dipz108: Sketchbook

    Hey, i'm new to this :/ my name's Deepesh, I'm 17 years old and want to go into Illustration/Concept art/storyboarding. I'm currently in sixth form and have been drawing for as long as I can remember. I've only started taking it seriously recently and am desperate to improve! alot!

    Here's just some random pieces atm... Don't have a scanner right now, so i'll upload what I can. Critique is encouraged

    *What I can't upload atm: some anatomy, poses, portraits (I'll try and get them up asap)*
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    These, I did back in Year 11 (2008-2009) when I wasn't really concentrating on individual studies
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    These are more recent:
    Self portrait studies in: graphite/digital/oils
    Digital lighting study + still life

    Self-portraits
    Graphite: around 2 hours
    Digital: up to 2hrs30mins
    Oils: [part1] - 2hrs ... [part2] - total: 3hrs30mins
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    Just a crappy oil painting of me... the transition from jaw to neck is quite horrible, I know :/ - any critiques are appreciated!
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    NO IDEA why there are no comments in here! Your work is really nice You have a nice eye for detail and proportion These portraits done in graphite at the top are amazinggg, sad you didn't finish them though :/ I have not used oil paint so I can't give any critiques with that..but they are coming along nicely. Maybe do some face studies, then try and tackle another self portrait

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    Thank you I was beginning to get a little depressed for being ignored in this vast world :'( - and .. what would you say is the best way of studying faces?

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    Welcome I'm not sure what the BEST way is...but some Loomis and Bridgman face constructions would be good to look at

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    righto, thanks

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    Hey thanks for the comment.

    Your portrait #2 is awesome o.O

    can't really say much for now ( post more! )

    just keep it up!
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    thank you - yeah I still need a scanner for all my studies.. I may have to resort to taking a photo I guess :/ - There'll be more up soon.
    - "She is a suggestion, as I have said, of a new manner. I find her in the curves of certain lines, in the loveliness and subtleties of certain colours."

    SKETCHBOOK: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=193301

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    Dayum, your oils are getting better, the transition from jaw to kneck on post #4 isn't bad all, though it seems as if you've just focused on rendering your face rather than on what it is supported by.

    keep going dude!

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    Your sketches are just great! Can i ask how big the first pencil drawing is? ive tried getting that level of smoothness with pencil but maybe i just need to work a bit bigger.

    I cant really offer much more because your sense of colour is so far beyond me!!

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    Your sketches are just great! Can i ask how big the first pencil drawing is? ive tried getting that level of smoothness with pencil but maybe i just need to work a bit bigger.

    I cant really offer much more because your sense of colour is so far beyond me!!

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    Exon - Thanks.. and "what it's supported by" you mean the skeletal structure? I didn't think about that, cheers.

    8bit - It was on A4 ... the actual drawing was a little smaller than the full A4 though... then when my art teacher/technician mounted it for display...to my HORROR...they had cut it down to the size of the actual drawing :| ... now it's a small bit of paper with a great big dirty mark on her beautiful forhead :'( sorry.. very traumatic time for me.
    - "She is a suggestion, as I have said, of a new manner. I find her in the curves of certain lines, in the loveliness and subtleties of certain colours."

    SKETCHBOOK: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=193301

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    the two pencil ones are really good, are they done from photo reference?
    ive been staring at the newer stuff and i can't really think of anything to crit, being a beginner. on the last one you did, the eye on the left seems exceptionally white, maybe add some colour to it?
    anyway im subscribing to your sb

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