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July 29th, 2010 #144
Here's my entry. I may drop in some value to separate out forms, but it's strictly a line-based character drawing this week.
Some cool pieces in here so far! A few that strike me, one way or another:
IVIATT - Nice drawing. Love those fingers.
Carnifex - I'd consider dampening or eliminating the glow on the gun. Right now it's the highest contrast area on the character and the eye snaps there. It's more important to see her working the panel.
Shogo - Make sure we know those are wires and not, say, branches. Maybe put some ports/connectors at the ends?
Kamikazuh - Looking good!
Saleem - Cool sword. Where's the hacker?
LukusMaximus - I like the cartoon proportions, though the hacker part isn't readily apparent. I'd give the white space around the figure a hard rather than a soft edge, and nudge the saturation and value of that red so it doesn't 'vibrate' against the green so much.
maria riaz - Where's his other leg?
nyje - More contrast! Everything blends into the same middle-dark value right now.
RichLyons - Killer design. Strong silhouette, practical gear. What's with the one yellow pocket?
Again, nice work guys!
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July 29th, 2010 #145
It's getting close....
July 30th, 2010 #146
can't put my finger on it but something wonky's going on around her ankles and that gun. I think the shading is making them all fall together in 2D, if that makes sense. The gun's placement isn't immediately apparent as being in /front/ of her legs and hanging, not just floating.
Aughhh, I wonder if I still have time to get in one this....
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July 30th, 2010 #147
Creedy: Though the face is very well rendered it seems a bit too big comapred to the shoulder and arm size, or maybe it's just because his left arm is bigger than the right one due to the gauntlet that makes me feel that...need to see your piece at a further step to confirm that.
Carnifex : awesomely warm and nice colors.
Saleem : reminds me a bit too much of Sol Badguy in guilty gear at this step, you may have to change things here and there.
Kingkostas : great design but i think you're missing the "The Hacker is a solitary unit, so he has to be able to defend himself
- Basically the Hacker is intelligent and stealthy, but also has a tough side" part of the brief
here's my take so far.
Edit: wondered about the wip we put on the final thread if i had to remove the dialogue because well this is chow not pow...
Last edited by Feil Magnus; July 30th, 2010 at 05:09 AM.
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July 30th, 2010 #148
Hey kosta really nice and original entry Maybe make him give more attention to the PC and the hand holding the pc needs some attention i think ( what i mean is that i wouldnt for exsample hold the back of the screen like that, the whole palm maybe just the fingers are enough(an de katalaveneis gt ta agglika m einai skata pes to)
Saleem love the thumbnail sketches i think the 2nd one is my fav, its really dynamic
Kamikazuh really nice colors
Rodriguez the perspective on the last piece is nice the chest though seems a lil bit flat
Carnifex really nice style and colors i think its all right like that. Maybe u could draw some more bkground cause it looks a little bit empty with all this blue maybe just forms of some buildings
Well guys looking really good
Heres my piece! i couldnt really work on it much and i think i wont till sunday so maybe this is the finished piece!
Last edited by Cameli; July 30th, 2010 at 04:59 AM.
July 30th, 2010 #149
And here i think is the final piece....dunno what else to do
July 30th, 2010 #150
July 30th, 2010 #151
No problem man^^The chest is looking better now but there is one more thing that maybe needs fixing:the part of the legs that is under the glass table should have a lighter green and not darker since its behind the glass!Keep updating
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i think thats my final version...
any comments are welcome...
July 30th, 2010 #153
Nice perspective and the bullet effect is sweet man! Next time try to render the lines out!
July 30th, 2010 #154
thanks for the suggestions everyone! i'll check on what works and what not
cameli - edges are abit blurry,especially on his gun arm. possibly try to put more red into the skintones aswell,especially in the shades,might make a good contrast with the blue light.
rodriguez - this one definately needs more contrast. you gotta figure out if the room is lit from above, or just from the computer screens.
dkiearth - can't help but think it looks like gordon freeman with hair. also can't tell where the light is coming from.
Last edited by Carnifex; July 30th, 2010 at 11:48 AM.
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July 30th, 2010 #156