Wouldn't mind having some crit These are the most recent
What is this about? Who is it for? What do you want to communicate?
These don't make sense. The first one has several unrelated elements on seperate parts of the page, with no clear message.
I don't have any complaints about the first one. I like the second one more. I just think you should sketch the character, instead of using a filter that's supposed to look like you did. Trace if need be. The imagery is great, but it stinks of filter.
I like the second one more.
I don't think mathematics, coke, sci fi and pretty flourishes