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    some of my graphic design

    Wouldn't mind having some crit These are the most recent
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    What is this about? Who is it for? What do you want to communicate?
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    These don't make sense. The first one has several unrelated elements on seperate parts of the page, with no clear message.
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    The first one was for a challenge to communicate your interests through design. In my case it was mathematics, coke, sci fi and pretty flourishes

    The second one I imagined as a graphic for a game, called vice
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    I don't have any complaints about the first one. I like the second one more. I just think you should sketch the character, instead of using a filter that's supposed to look like you did. Trace if need be. The imagery is great, but it stinks of filter.
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    Yeah, I shouldn't have been lazy and used a filter, thanks for the feedback
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    I'm definitely not calling you lazy. I'm just encouraging you to use your illustration skills. You are using a feature intended for people without the privilege of drawing ability. You have the talent, so put it to good use.
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    NICE !
    I like the second one more.
    I don't think mathematics, coke, sci fi and pretty flourishes
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