I don't have any complaints about the first one. I like the second one more. I just think you should sketch the character, instead of using a filter that's supposed to look like you did. Trace if need be. The imagery is great, but it stinks of filter.
I'm definitely not calling you lazy. I'm just encouraging you to use your illustration skills. You are using a feature intended for people without the privilege of drawing ability. You have the talent, so put it to good use.