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    PLEASE HELP! I need to know which one looks best. URGENT!

    (Horizontal comp)
    I don't know which one is best. Which one do you think has the most potential when being rendered out? I did a value study on one but i'm not really liking this composition. Do you think the other thumbnails are better?

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    Or do you think I should just go with this one? Does this comp have more potential than the rest?

    I need as much feedback as possible because this is for my midterm due on Tuesday.

    Thanks.

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    I prefer it horizontal. The one you've rendered is very cramped - flip it an see. If you made it even wider, put the orca with the man over and the entrance more central it would give the composition breathing space. Also try to keep the water horizontal. The vertical one looks like a mass evacuation of a planet, which maybe more what you want.

    Hope that helped and good luck.


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    I like the penultimate frame best. it's the only one that doesn't have a huge foreground character that seems to block the scene. That technique could work, but they are just too close, and are more in the way than anything imo.

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