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    Promotional Materials

    A sample of promotional material i am creating for my soon-to-launch illustration venture...

    BTW, i am going to be offering design services for anyone who needs work done.
    I studied graphic design in school, so i have a variety of skills.

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    I have no idea what the first word says. Haaaari? And the logo is just two A's stuck together, which isn't too interesting... nothing wrong with the fact that it's two A's, it just needs to have a more creative execution. "The future is coming" should probably be centered against the bottom stems of the upside down A's. What's the point of the upside down 2? Doesn't really make any sense. The way you have Winter 2010 tangent to the colored square is very awkward, but if you lowered it it would look like a motivational poster. I'd probably avoid the white words in a black outline idea, unless you can make it look fresh in some way.

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    Everything Liffey said. Also, just ditch the reflection entirely. The colors are ugly and the radial blurs are sloppily done.

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    The logo is the american airlines logo with extreme kerning.

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