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    I love creature Design (Need help)

    OK so i started doing some creature design and just wanted to have some fun with it.
    let me know what you think

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    Hello there,

    I'll start off by saying it has a neat feel to it, the entire piece. The only thing that I am thinking really needs any changes and this is purely suggestion and not a necessary change is that the arm holding the pencil is sort of up in the air. When I am drawing and bracing the sketchpad on my lap I usually would rest my elbow on my thigh or something of the sort. I've seen many people do that as well. So that would be a suggestion, more than anything else.

    I like it and I think that the creature is well done, it looks believable.

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    Awesome

    I think the looseness of the monster somehow are connected to the elbow in the air.

    Schweet picture.

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    Beautiful. It could just use a little cleanup here and there. There are some outlines on the pant legs and the elbow (the one on our left) that feel much too harsh, along with some obvious rectangular seams in the floor texture.

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    Sweet! I like atmosphere and use of colors and light.

    Maybe you could want to push highlights on guy's face and shirt a little, they look someway too matte and less lit compared to the creature floating close to them.

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    hey guys i finished it and its in the work completed section here:
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=191778

    or my Deviant art account here:
    http://mamills.deviantart.com/#/d2tjz48

    i just wanted to thank everyone that helped out on this thread
    your feedback helped greatly

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    The head of the creature is very good painted. I think that this image, needs strong area, focusing attention. But not toom much, because is almost perfect, just some light and contrast, for example in the head of man.

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    Good start!

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