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The name said it all. pencils used: 4h, 3h,2h,h and 5b.
I just want to know if I have improved at all.
Hey! I'm not very familiar with your previous work so I'll just point out a few that came to mind when I saw this. In terms of rendering I think the skin might be a bit heavily shaded. The forms on the back are quite subtle and in comparison the shadow under the buttocks for example would be much much darker. As it is now I think the darkest shadow is on the back.
I'm not very good at critiquing rendering so I'll focus on the drawing instead.
I get the feeling that this pose looks a bit stiff. If you were to find the centerline through the whole pose it's pretty much a straight line. I think you can get a lot more charm and sensuality if you try to think about emphasising curves. Try to feel yourself sinking into the pose... I always start a drawing by trying to nail down the overall flow or gesture of the pose before fleshing it out.
If you were actually going for a metallic look on the skin, you need much higher contrasting (blacks and whites) and sharp reflections of her environment.
Judging your first SB Posts you Improved a lot! But still a long way to go.
If you look for a metallic look, that means the skin has no color itself but reflects the environment like a mirror. Also called Chrome Look, like the Silver Surfer. Get some reference of chrome-sculptures, like from HR Giger and do some texture studies of the material. Reference is the key, also for the figure.
A great way to improve, and I tell that a lot ;-) , is to draw lots from life, the people around you, and also attending lifedrawing sessions.
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