Hey, well you know I think you sholud start in the sketchbook forum first. There you might have a chance to get a comment after some time posting. Theese forms are, in my opinion focused at more advenced work. Dont take it as an offence, its just an advice. Back to your drawing, I guess you should try to do more sketches of the figure, with better reff picture (Its hard to see shapes on this one). Take a look at posemaniacs.com and try some of that. Send me a note after you poste something . Looking forward to see more. Bye
Oh sorry I was thinking the other way, I figured this was more concept since most of those sketch book work was awesome and mines wasn't lol. Do i make another thread there or will the mods move this one? ..I'm not sure if this really deserves another thread.
As a fellow N00b I can tell you that this forum with such a high concentration of art especially amazing art means when you have a sketchbook with stuff that isn't amazing you won't get many or in my case any comments. I think I got one actually.
But you have put pen to paper and that is the first step. I recommend the tutorial forum..
That is the place to browse and find ways to improve.