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Here is my skeches and I'll be glad to hear(i mean read))..) your opinion about my works.
On your comments i try alway answer in your Sketchbook or your other thread)
Latest works on last pages
Last edited by n1frit; April 10th, 2014 at 05:36 AM.
some crazy drawnings
Some new stuff
Hello, http://attachments.conceptart.org/fo...1&d=1295251480 this one looks quite cool, though try not to put same strenght contrasts all over the drawing, makes it hard to read, try to look for more values everywhere,
Thanks a lot! I will try))
Great anatomy on your skeches! Its from imagination or model? how long you draw it?
Hi everyone! Some works for your review)
Last edited by n1frit; January 18th, 2011 at 05:03 AM.
completion of skech
well not bad seems youre on the right way just go on and on
try to find your weak spots and train them, never hide them
my Sketchbook plz help me become a better artist !
I don't know your background, but you draw pretty well, especially bodis (form and so..).
I thik you'll have to work with some gravity weights (last picture [assassins greed?], #7 womens are great), don't lose sketch line (#7 left picture both hands and one leg).
These are my first points, more like suggestions... you don't have to follow them, if you don't want to - it's all up to you, you'll do great.
I'm a big fan of the style of #8, a lot of confident depth and color there
In your concepts, try not to make the pose look so arbitrary, especially in comparison with the expression of the face. For example, girly on bottom right of #7 looks like she's menacing, but she has a sort of wispy, innocent, girlish pose, confusing to the viewer, and makes it look a bit silly. Also, careful of your proportions, especially in your shoulders/heads.
When you make a landscapes try to more think about a atmospheric perspective it's nice trick to show depth.
cheers and keep it up mate
ps. thx for suscribe my thread
I think it's great that you're willing to just jump in and go all out with vivid colours, but I think that you could be using/varying saturation for your benefit! When your whole painting is extremely saturated, it's hard to find a focus. Things in the far distance aren't as vivid as things nearby, so it might help to try to desaturate your backgrounds/distant objects a little more to help your focal points pop out.
You got some awesome paintings here! Really loving the first mech chick on your last update And i agree with Amarok, its some really tasty colors, but the images needs some more depth.
Keep it up this way!
nice paintings. maybe try to do some different styles. go for soft and render it out for a long time. the quick, scratchy stuff is decent but try to experiment more.
as for your figures - they look awkward. learn a little bit more from life and observation.
hey fella , sorry that it took so long for me to return the favor .
so actually I do not ave that much to say. so Ill just make a little pro - con list if you dont mind ^^
-use of color
-preeeeeetty unique design on some of them
-a bit to little contrast, means that you trade every part of the picture to equally in terms of linework,shadow and values
-few to no focal points...try to work out an area that attracts the viewer...as for now my eyes are all over the place ^^
hope that helps
digging where your style is going
keep it up I'll be staying tuned
sketchbook updated October 6th
Amazing work n1frit, loving your style and subjects!
The only crit I could possibly give would to just see some of your work a little tighter and more refined because your sketches themselves look fantastic!