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    Finally got me a 2nd monitor. It's pretty nice bein able to draw and watch every season of scrubs at the same time. Anyway, just some studies for now, I'll get my TAD stuff on here tomorrow.









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    Bethany K Thanks, always nice to hear encouragement

    Finally got my first job as an artist ever. Gotta design a logo for my MMA team and for one of our sponsors. Once finished I'll recieve a percentage for each t-shirt sold. Pretty excited, I'll show some of the logo ideas next time so for now I've got stuff!






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    Spectacular shading on those still lifes! Good luck with the logo, that sounds neat. I find your fire guy's pose a bit confusing, it looks like the main action is the kick but then I think his hand would be going the other way. Is he trying to punch while he kicks?

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    Vertical Thanks dawg. And actually, with common muay thai kicks the arm points in line with the same side leg while the opposite arm protects the face. Doin MMA has it's perks






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    Been wanting to work on tryin environments for once, It's still a work in progress, but I like it so far.



    Also been tryin chalk art, only problem is the only chalk I can get at a store nearby is fuckin crayola chalk which has no black and a bunch of mid toned colors.








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    you most certainly are improving! I really like the digital portrait that you made! Very nice muscles studies however You still need to work on your gestures. I still get a sense of stiffness. If you could work on that and apply your knowledge of muscles, I know for sure that your work will be more expressive. Keep up the studies!

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    yogeshj25 Thanks, and you're definitely right. Gestures and poses are my weakest points, that's why I'm doin those for the rest of the night!

    Here's my Teen Challenge submittion. I have to re-design a video game character, so I chose a pokemon of course

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    forrest~ i'm gonna critique you hard so watch out
    first of all, the challenge is to redesign the video game char,

    you didn't really do that, but rather 'made a realistic version of it' liek what rapoza has done with the TMNT characters
    you have time man, think it through
    redesign it!
    also on image making side of things..
    you have time to make a DOPE illustration, why choose such a dull pose? this creature could be fucking scary and in your face! the gradient bg is boring, as is the drop shadows
    you need to establish a better light source, you have him with a front on light source, thats quite inconsistent
    change it to something angled, backlit or wahtever! have fun with it
    also your rendering too soon,same with all you drawings - sketch man! drawing isnt about rendering everything, it's about gesture, feeling, emotion, having fun and all taht shit
    look at the pros like, Cpt Obivious
    he doesnt render eveyrthing out, it wastes time
    show this as a 'redesign' to whoever made pokemon for their latest game, they won't appreciate this, and they'd want variants, make something new man!
    also your colors are suuuper dull, get reference!!
    also, dont read this and say, yeah yeah yeah i already know all this. sure you do, but APPLY THIS SHIT MAN- you will improve

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    Nice start on the last one...I did a little paintover though to show a few things.

    I changed the pose to be in perspective. Before the positioning of the legs were not in perspective and looked somewhat odd. I just put them in a basic standing pose for now (I know it loses some of the action of the pose like this, but I wanted to just fix it for now, you can play with the positioning more). I am admittedly not very skilled in animal anatomy, but I thought that the front legs looked somewhat detached and misplaced from the body, so tried to reposition them too.

    Anyhow, the main thing I wanted to mention was the focus and lighting of the piece. You rendered everything equally on it. It is better to show more contrast in one area and render it more in order to set a focal point. I made the focal point his head, so increased to lighting on it. I also made the fire on the closest foot more saturated and brighter. The farther elements I blurred a bit and glazed the background grey lightly over so they receded a bit and were not as "in your face". The smoke from his back is great for subordinating the spikes on his back/side and kind of covering them up, since their very sharp edges drew a bit too much attention.

    Lastly I added in some of the lighting created by the fires. Fire is a light source, and will therefore cast an orange light on nearby objects such as his underside and the ground.

    Hope all this helps! Good luck with TC!

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    I like the chalk dragon. Try to use the dark of the underground functioning as the darker tones in your picture

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    You've come along leaps and bounds since I last checked on your work Entei looks sweet, just check the perspective on the legs closest to us and bump the contrast on the firey feet..things are coming along well, keep it up!

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    ryanoir Maciej Kuciara is freaking intense. And your critique was so good that I decided to simply restart and try somethin different for the TC this week. Thanks man

    Andrew Sonea Also thanks for the critiqueing. I do have a problem with adding detail throughout the whole of the image and not having a focus point. I'll try and work on that, thanks

    Zeitwolf Thanks man, the chalk stuff is mostly just experimentin an stuff

    SamC Thanks Sam

    So I got 1st place in some bus drawing contest and won a set of 36 prismacolors. I don't usually use prismacolors so I've been messin around with them. Theyre fun. Not gonna bother postin all my studies cuz I'm bein lazy so I'll just show some fun stuff for now.







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    Sorry for lack of updates, been addicted to a digimon game

    I've been doing a lot of portraits of friends lately, but I've been givin them away before I get a chance to scan them. Here's one I did, I'm only doin a few more and then after that I'm gonna start charging people for them because it takes up a lot of time.



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    Haven't posted in way too long ha. I've been drawing still, but just haven't really been too influenced to post on any of my sketchbooks.

    I'll just show you what I did today and the day before. LIFE DRAWINGS!




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    Oh gosh *_* /TOUCHES

    Keep up the great work dude ;u;

    I don't know what I can say to help (no useful advice at least) but at least you get a few smilies from me!

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    LovelessDevout ha, thanks

    Just a sp and some charcoal doodle for today. Been gettin more into charcoal stuff and I kinda like it.




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    Digital self portrait:



    A little WIP of some elk, tryin to make this look as badass as I can. I'm goin to add some kind of markings on its body aswell:



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    ayoo man.

    Stuff's looking good, especially the orange still life. Somethings throwing me off from a lot of the digitals though. A lot of the colors seem like you just turned up/down the brightness for the shadows and highlights, instead of picking a new color. Might just be me though.

    On the last piece, the design is coool but the pose is stiff. Why is one leg opened up when the others/rest of the body are all stationary? Keep pushing it man!

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    skMOP Sup, Idk why it looks that way to you with the colors. I did adjust the colors of the orange early early on in the digital, but then used the color picker from then on. About the elk, I really don't know, it's just how I imagined it ha

    Been doin a lot of portraits of friends lately and I can really see a difference in portraits I did a couple months ago and the ones I do now. Also, I finished the elk. I'm not really putting up any studys because it's too time consuming and I'm a lazy man.





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    As I've looked through your sketchbook I can definitely tell you have improved a great deal. : )
    Your most recent still life's are great, still need to work on your portraits maybe ask somebody to sit for you because frankly they all look like they are copied from a photograph. (Correct me if I'm wrong.)
    Keep up the great work though!

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    Cbee Thanks dawg, and yeah I've been drawing from pictures. It'll be hard for me to find a friend to sit still for a couple hours, but I know I should ha.

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    Haven't posted in a couple days... Oh well, here's my crappy teen challenge submittion. Also, I was inspired by Dave Rapoza's TMNT portraits to try and make my own. I felt like Deadpool would look cool as a portrait.





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    there is definitely a huge improvement, mostly on the digital pieces
    hand-drawn stuff, thats more dificult imo, it will take much longer to learn,
    but working on both mediums is cool you are gonna feed what you learn in digital into analogic and viceversa
    anyway those life studies on post #225 are certainly amazing

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    yea, you definately mproving! i like the studies of the girls, nice shading! and deadpool is the shit!

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    You like crits?

    RE: Deadpool... remember that as the face turns back into space, it will naturally get darker... so that highlight on the right edge of his face should get a bit darker near the edge and blend a bit more into the background.

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    I'm shitting bricks here >.< Your so good for 15 or 16. Nice Job.

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    f1x thank you very much

    NickyBeats deadpool is indeed "the feces"

    p sage Thanks, I'll remember that for sure

    Van S Ha, don't shit bricks cuz you'll make my sketchbook all shitty

    Haven't updated in awhile. Doh! I've just been casually drawing unfortunately, I need to kick my on ass in to gear and start studying. I have however started a small shop on Cafepress.com so I can sell some t-shirt designs (hopefully). T-shirt designing has always been a fun idea I've wanted to do so I'm glad I can finally try it.

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    Finished the CD cover, I also did a little thing for a Homebrew MMORPG being made (Psithyroi). I'm now working on an angel as a present for my cousin and I'm drawing a charcoal drawing of one of the photos from Scott Eaton's photos, but unfortunately my camera is crapping out on me and I'm not able to take WIP pics of it.


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    Watchin Teen Titans! Woo!

    Finished the angel, definitely gotta do some wing studies...

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    Your progress + your age just makes me want to ... ahhhh your so good!!! >.<


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