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    Talking WIP - Kuebolu Bobo (help)

    Hi guys i'm new here
    my english is not very good, and i hope you didn't mind about the watermarks
    because is more look like a spam... maybe

    well this my wip, about to edit my previous works
    because it's look so bad

    previously artwork



    and now the new WIP

    2.1 This is my start, a base color and a little detail. I want to make the mood is more dark? because she was sheltering under a leafy tree.


    2.2 The next progress, still try find the right mood and still confuse with it, any sugestion?



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    The attached image is a lot more desaturated than the others and works better for it. You have dark shadows on the tree but none around her, the dog, bench, potato or the wrench. Even it out and decide which way you want to go with it.


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    Thanks Black, then i'm working with it. Oh ya i'm forgot about the shadow from the tree , thanks a lot.

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    Agreed with Black Spot, the attached image colors are a lot easier on the eyes.
    I think you should make the shadows on and around the tree not so black since the scene is in broad daylight and wouldn't make sense to have shadows so dark.
    Also on the bench, be careful with the light coming through the leaves and hitting the slats, the light shouldn't be showing in the spaces between.

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    all of them are great, but maybe foirst one is the best.

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    @wooblood, thanks for advice i do what i can to make more good than before
    @Danilo, thanks but did you mean first on the top?

    here the progress and the final
    thank you so much for giving me an a good advice, is very helpfull.



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