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    I personally like the first version more that the warm one)
    I think the plot is cruel and agressive and warm colors are not needed)
    Good job, overall!

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    3rd page

    cool set


    warm set



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    cool stuff man


    I almost hesitate to say this because this coming from a pure aesthetic choice that enjoy to see.....but it might be a cool experiment to try with some of these panels.

    suggested atmosphere

    since many of the panels are the same tone it is giving everything a flat look even tho the artwork has been rendered nicely.

    either do a pass with a soft airbrush reduced to 30% soft light setting in photoshop to knock some of those backgrounds back a bit

    or gausian blur about 30 % the backgrounds only ( leave the characters alone ) to adjust the focus- then u might not need to adjust the lightness setting.


    see what that looks like

    hey u might dig it


    just my two cents

    nice work man !

    - C











    the sketchbook:


    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=111671

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