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    Critique Request :)

    Hey guys I'm up for some critique on some of my works.

    I'm looking to improve these pieces as much as possible, so hit me with everything you've got!

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    Hey! Nice style you have there. I especially like the Luna chick, very delicate and warm.

    I'm pretty new to CA but here's a few things that caught my eye:

    "Bionic Warrior"
    1.The neck seems a bit thick and stiff from the back to me, or maybe its just too short. Or possibly the front arm is placed to high on the pose?

    "The pirates stand"
    1.In my opinion the pirates face lacks some emotion, considering there's some possible shootout action involved, maybe add a more concentrated look and some action to the pose?

    2.Is she standing in a crate? The overall setting and the background seems a bit difficult to grasp, atleast at the moment (not sure how finished it is).

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    Looking pretty cool, loving the self portrait, the only thing I could suggest with that is to brighten the eye a little to draw the viewer to it.

    In regard to the other pieces:

    Bionic Warrior:
    The face seems a little flat, I know it's side on but something seems a bit plain about it, maybe if you light up the bg behind it a little, should make it pop more.

    The Pirates Stand:
    Theres a lot of blown out white going on in this piece, its hard to read the forms. Add some nice shadow forms to the shirt and change the tangent which runs from the ship up her sleeve, they almost read as the same form at a glance (hope that makes sense!)

    looking cool though

    -HG

    -Geared up Dave!

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