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    Thelana WIP

    Hey all, new to this forum. I'm hoping to be humbled and get better here. Unfortunately I've been drawing for a long time without any other eyes to pick everything apart. So, this is something I really need.

    Here is a piece I'm working on for a contest. I'm having difficulties capturing the action(composition, maybe?). The horse and rider are suppose to be galloping out of a sort of mist with silhouetted figures around them. Here's the under sketch with quick values. I may change the horse's pose, and definitely the arrangement of the silhouettes. And how she is sitting on the horse.


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    If you want more action you need to include more angled lines. There are a lot of verticals, which are mostly used to convey the opposite.

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