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    Feedback Please

    I would appreciate it if you guys could give me some constructive criticism.

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    The desing looks nice but you need to work on your values.
    Everyting seems to be in the same range, you need a lot more contrast.
    Ad highlights and darker shadows. And use some harsh edges to make it less blurry.

    Good start though!

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    okay. thank you guys. I'll be on that asap

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