Nicely done fggt although big guy looks a bit like chimp but yeh its kinda developing story we¨ll see at the end....
Nice lines here!
I think it is good, that you are so focused on doing linework, but if you do that at least try to play around with a little bit more tools. If you have such good lines and want to scan them to maybe colour it later, I would suggest you buy some good black pens and try it without being able to erase a lot. This will help you sharpen your draftsmanship to do more accurate and purposeful lines.
I haven't read all the comments but I guess anatomy is an issue, but you will get better with that naturally as you progress in your study. Furthermore I think it is really really commendable how much variety you have in the poses you are choosing in your characters. Do you use reference for the more difficult ones? If you do' good job in doing so, if you don't, good job on the poses but you can push it so much further if you get some good reference for studying.
Keep working with those figures, they look VERY good. Try to see if you can find the mistakes you may be doing and then correct them. It's better to spend a lot of time in checking that the proportions that you're handling are right, than finishing the drawings and adding deatails.
Check the shoulders, they tend to be more in line with the neck. Also check out the poses: sometimes the limbs or the hand twist a little too much (the poses are perhaps possible, but very unconfortable).
Analyze the 3D of the forms.
Very good stuff, keep 'em comming.
@sevill_yank yeah, wait what becouse of the hair? i'm kind of like that D: .but thanks for the comment betch !
@Onisan indeed! even though i'm not good visualisating thins on a empty paper (i put a lot of really light lines which you can't see at the end when starting to draw, i can get fairly acurate lines when i know what to draw), i should try it anyway
no really, i mean its a issue for everyone but i'm learning it okay i'll just keep going , i used a lot of ref on almost, if not all, the ones on the first post, but i didn't used any after post 42 (exept for sometimes my own hands you know), still i also think i should have used on some of them.
@lennon i'll keep ithat in mind
yeah ,hnm ,i don't know i see a lot of people there underestimating the movability shoulders have,still i do tend to draw then too low though
yeah hehe i like drawing poses like that sometimes, like the one on 50 the right leg looks pretty twisted still i like that though
thanks for the tips i was planning to reply while posting something but i could't hold
playing with a pencil again.
those are fanarts...from avatar i drew sparky sparky boom man and right after i hert about the new avatar season spinoff thingy, and drew the main chara, Korra, or tryed sinse the only image i had was from her back.
anyway awesome can't wait to see that show, avatar is one of my favorite cartoons evah!
Last edited by HolyMane; July 26th, 2010 at 11:28 PM. Reason: messe up the upload at first ,now korra is there
fuck! its 3 am and my tablet is working only when it wants for some danm reason, but i'll try to fix tomorrow...
so anyway here i am fanboying all over blizzard. mainly becouse last week the star craft 2 ad went over open TV on sunday night, and i almost cried, it is the first videogame ad on TV since , donkeykong country, like 14 years ago, before eveyone on this country started thinking videogames are pure evil and shit .
now, i can hear the sweet holy voice of my bed calling...
Pô cara, curti o seu traço! Você parece conhecer bastante de anatomia.
Tenta fazer mais estudos de cor. Esse ultimo ficou bem legal!
Parabéns velho e continua mandando ver!
My Sketchbook Thread --> Critiques please!
@bommachado VLW! cara to uma bosta em cor ainda ,e tão mais facil quando é prto e branco :<
here, did other studys today ...including colour studys, but then i did this black and white one which came way better than the coloured ones...
BAH GOTTA KEEP ON IT!!
Last edited by HolyMane; August 4th, 2010 at 11:08 PM.
sketch O holic...that site hates me, i was unable to post the first sketch.
i don't know how people do such things in one hour, must be voodoo ,dark magic , roids or something.
a friend asked why i write so much on this thing, even though i myself don't belive anyone reads it,
and...it is so that i can get back here years later and read my own thoughs...yes
that will be fun.
1 hour sketches of the sketch marathon on sketcholic (whatever the way its writen)it was fun:
2nd:eletric elf (or something like that)
3rd:penguins and robots (i failed at this one and didn't saved it)
4th:little ugly creature
hnm.i notice the only thing i can sort of do right with the tablet is line work, so..I WON'T POST ANYTHING DONE WITH A TABLET TILL I ACTUALLY LEARN HOW TO USE IT!! FROM NOW ON
Last edited by HolyMane; August 5th, 2010 at 11:54 PM.
Interresting sketchbook you have here.
Your lines, and overall anatomy knowledge is impressive, but color... oh boy : P
I mean it's not new i've seen same situation with some other people, just find some good inspirations ( asian artists are great, when it comes to colors [ check Zhaoming Wu]) and nail it down, wish you all the best!
You have some cool character concepts and lineart. I would love to see you play around with some environments and backgrounds, though ^_^
My full range of work: http://anjyil.deviantart.com/gallery/
My weird sketchbook here (it`s best to just skip to the end haha): http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...06#post2430006
@Icecold thanks! oh yeah i know that D: i'll search these guys ,once my lines where crapy and dull and my anatomy knowledge where patetic, i'll just do what i did before, keep on it ,and nail it down!
@anjyil thanks! indeed , this sketchbook needs more kind of things!
after puting some colour on it i'll try to put some places
holy burning potato batman this thing is taking ages!
well i did't expected it to be any diferent actually
yay for learning how to render stuff, diferen't from before,when i didn't knew anyshit about rendering, now i know a shit and a half!yey
What pencils do you use? I use 2B and 4B.
Everything is better with dinosaurs.
yes its on my DA page, its not finished yet but i worked on it and i plan at least add something tomorrow and never see it again
tried to draw thsi one as fast as possible, still ,both togueder too a lil more than 2 hours to finish
(shes supposed to be a crasy pisycho tall bitch that is not really that atractive :3