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    Talking my work

    hey you guys

    i'm quiet new to the art scene and all. i think i'm now 10 to 11
    months really into arts form drawing with pencil to painting digitally
    and i'm still only 15 years old so lots and lots of time to improve
    right

    so here are my best works and i hope to get some feed back from you guys
    i would really appreciated it

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    this is my first painting ever and the sketch isn't mine i used a sketch from a tutorial dvd. the sketch belongs to Brian Haberlin.




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    Hi, In the first image I would add more translucent effect to the water, so there is some light in the water under the dock where is now total shadow, also maybe in the closest foreground water could have some of it

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    15?!!!!!! Wow, I wish I started painting at that age. Some wicked good work you have!! Never stop improving!

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    ey guys i'm back with an other painting
    and i've also lisent to Danilo and edited that painting so here you
    guys i hope you like them all and please tell if the first one or the edited
    version is better.

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    On the new painting:

    I'm not sure the upper right hand corner (or any corner) is a good spot to put your focal point. I understand the figure plays a big role in this, but darkness surrounding a light source is where the highest contrast is, and thus this becomes your focal point- intended or not.

    The figure is barely recognizable. It's all about values. He's too close to the darks around him and seems to have the same colors as well. Just too hard to notice.

    "She took the ice cube trays out of the freezer. What kind of a sick bitch takes the ice cube trays out of the freezer?"

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    ey guys here's an other entry for the thegnomonworkshop i hope you like it
    and please leave a comment or critique it would be much apriciated ^^

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    ey guys an other entry to thegnomonworkshop i hope you all like it and don't forget to visit my deviantart page and leave a comment or critique


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    Nice work, are you a self taught artist?

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    thanks paladin

    i'm glad that you like my work and yes i'm a self taught artist.
    I've been drawing and digitally painting for almost 2years now and i'm just 16years old so i still have allot of time to improve my self ^^

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    ey guys

    I've been reworking my last post lately and here is my improved version
    i hope you all like it. and please leave a comment or critique on my work
    that would really help me on my way to becoming a succesfull artist ^^

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    Stay away from black. I know it's tempting, but it's extremely easily abused. Try keying things a bit lighter.

    Your stuff looks pretty good. I'd say to try spending even more time doing life drawing, on top of the work you're doing here. Keep doing the imagined piece, but spend some time practicing your fundamentals. You'll improve faster that way.

    Keep at it.

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