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    Concept Portfolio. Light & Comp. Critique Appreciated!

    Hi guys! I've recently taken up digital painting, so I'm still kinda new here. These are a few of the more finished pieces I've managed to pull out.

    I think I've got the technique down now, so critique on lighting and composition would be greatly appreciated. If you find something else wrong though, please get all up in my grills about it. Thanks!

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    I like those Ideas!

    Yeah really like them. I would say for the one with the targets in the sky. you could perhaps intergrate them a little more. It would look more believable if there was some type of fogging going on like when you look at stars they tend to flicker. Other than that I'd say you just need to practice and you'l imporve as you learn new tricks ( but I suppose thats common knowledge).

    Anyways, good work

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    These are great! I like the lightbulb, particularly because I can see a little frog man with creeping, tungsten hands...

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    Chimpulous: Thanks for the advice! Probably won't go back to it, 'cause I'm lazy, but I'll definitely keep unity between elements and layers in mind for future pieces.

    FinniganDusk: I will never unsee that.

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