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    Teen Challenge 85 :: Magic

    Teen Challenge 85 :: Magic

    Round 85 :: Magic

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    Magic. So many ways to describe it because let's say for example you said "Lilnebo is magic" then you would of course be right ;P
    As usual, be creative, push yourself and have fun
    Thanks Agrovent for the suggestion on "blood magic" just made it a bit more open
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    Trying hard to think of stuff that everyone will enjoy and I am thinking teen challenge should be a bit different from all the other challenges. Everything else is pretty specific so I want to keep TC as something a bit more relaxing and personal. Keeping it open as possible If you guys have any ideas throw them in the suggestions thread ----> Topic Ideas

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    Good Luck everyone and Hope you have fun! If you have any ideas for where the teen challenge should go then please either PM me or post it in the suggestions thread.
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    i think this one willbe a pencil drawing
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    Oh, this sounds interesting.
    was I left behind?
    Someone tell me, tell me I survived.
    Don't look so surprised that I'm home, but just for tonight.
    With rough hands and sore eyes
    so don't speak, I am tired.
    Let's just live through this lie.
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    just brainstorming some ideas. i am thinking of either focusing on some kind of sorcerer, or on something that would be summond (spell or deamon ect) in from a first person view.
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    Ok I'm very excited! This is going to be a blast to do!
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    I'm thinking of doing this if I get time. Im thinking the magic that is music. something along those lines
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    hmm... I'll see if I have a chance to do this, I have several ideas spinning around in the chaotic crock pot that is my mind...
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    Started on mine during English class today. Thinking this feels like it needs to be in ink. sorry for crappy photo, I'll have a proper scan when it's finished.

    Teen Challenge 85 :: Magic
    was I left behind?
    Someone tell me, tell me I survived.
    Don't look so surprised that I'm home, but just for tonight.
    With rough hands and sore eyes
    so don't speak, I am tired.
    Let's just live through this lie.
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    hey i liked the topic and it was pretty open so i thought i would jump in on this heres what i got so far still have to do some things to it to add the magic into it
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    crits please =)

    trying to have this done on time

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    Agrovent:
    Two things.
    The drawing of the hand is unsuccessful: it does not read structurally or spatially and as a central figure within the composition it is bringing the entire image down. This is a basic drawing problem, the edges of the forms you are describing do not relate to each other in a way that creates an integral whole. This is especially clear in the second iteration of your image where the lines describing the hand have been smoothed and generalized.

    The strings extending from the hand are spatially and compositionally problematic. Spatially, you have established a good sense of atmospheric perspective within the horde at the bottom of the composition, but it is contradicted by the bold lines of the string intersecting them at various depths. The strings should follow the same rules as the horde, lighter/lower contrast further way. Compositionally, i question the placement of the strings. It seems that you have settled on an instinctual solution, which is often fine. However as an illustration that is *constructed*, it may be useful to consider the use of the lines as a design problem. How would the image be effected if you had a string reaching into the foreground of the horde, as opposed to clustered in the mid-ground?
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    thanks Rarebit! i wish i had seen this earlier, before i went further with the piece, but i think i can still apply what you've mentioned, (with relation to the hand's proportions in particular)
    and looking back, i really feel like the two middle strings should venture further into the foreground, in any case, i've removed the strings for now, being that i wanted this to be about "necromancer" magic and not "master of puppets" which was the first reaction of several people who saw it...

    i need to find a way to really tie the theme in again, it sort of got lost in the development of the piece

    still a wip obviously...

    edit- LOL the one on the right totally looks like Billy Corgan > http://i50.tinypic.com/29f9hc4.jpg

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