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    innocence

    hiii guys . my name is sagar maske .i m a portrait artist from india . from long time i m on ca but i m inactive . i think its my first post here . i name this portrait "INNOCENCE " .
    this is a commision work .
    pencil and charcoal (for background ) on conda 160 gsm paper .

    pls give me some critique .

    thx for watching
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    Hey sagar.

    This is a lovely piece. Has something of Botticelli´s idealized women portraits. Did you use a reference?

    The curls in the hair are a bit strange to me.
    I would lighten up the dark wrinkles on her upper lip as well as between the clavicles. The wrinkles on the upper lip don´t line up with the bottom of the nose. They seem to go to the side of the nose.

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    thxx man .

    ya i use reference photo . actually original curves is too much hard to draw and i cant see them clearly coz i have low resolution pic . but i try to draw as much i can see .
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