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    future scene

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    future scene stuff
    feed back appreciated

    My stuff could use more detail, I'm so bad with detail
    and i think it might be slightly scewed

    I'm gonna work on this right now considering I've got a better idea of what to do with this thing

    Last edited by eptigo; November 26th, 2011 at 07:11 PM.
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    oh the pain
    need to work on it more
    tried to rearrange some of the elements in the image but that essentialy meant redrawing half of it T_T or something

    now i gotta shade it with lights and shadows man thats going to be painful

    the balcony seemed to be framing the thing somehow and seemed to limit the sensation of having this vast landscape so i figured if i shortened it it might give it more ... scape ...

    2/3rds of my buildings still feel very basic and some parts dont seem to work
    i cant figure out what to do with the round tower to the right and the buildings behind it

    man, this project is painful T_Tl

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    first thing i noticed is that the car and tower are about the same size, which makes them compete for attention. otherwise, I'd say the perspective is solid, and interested on seeing how you render this.

    "I haven't failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work."
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