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    "Brains" [Feb18] *Updated

    "Brains" [Feb18] *Updated

    Feb 17:
    Critique, suggestions, etc welcome. Work in progress.
    Painting in OpenCanvas 3.0. When I finish, I'll post the event file for a limited time. In the mean time - critique, please.

    Feb 18:
    Fixed a few inconsistencies. Attempting to flesh out different techniques. I wish I had more experience to play off of. White background removed, as I despise them.
    Last edited by Steve Nedley; February 19th, 2004 at 02:28 AM.
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    right click > save .

    That's hilarous man.
    "They were born, they grew up in the gutters, they went to work at twelve, they passed through a brief blossoming period of beauty and sexual desire, they married at twenty, they were middle-aged at thirty, they died, for the most part, at sixty. Heavy physical work, the care of home and children, petty quarrels with neighbors, films, football, beer, and, above all, gambling filled up the horizon of their minds."

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    I really love it .....and i would like a T-shirt of it.Only thing i don't like is his butt.
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    I think it looks great, it needs more refinement. the belly looks finished, everything else is still muddy compaired to it.

    The plane of the hand(with fork) could be defined more, right now the pinky looks as if it was coming from the wrist.

    The shadow on the teeth is way too sharp and looks lasso'd(which is probably what you did).

    besides that's it's awesome and hilarious
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    superbe work!
    crits (you asked : take another look at the arm holding the coconut, erm skullcap
    And do something about that hair honey

    great work, keep it up!
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    Finish it!

    And just to be fussy - move your signature from out of his arse.

    PLUS I agree with Davi about the teeth shadow, soften the edges.
    my sketches here... http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=92997

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