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    Portrait - Man

    This is my first digital portrait and I'm not quite certain where to go from here.
    Would someone be able to crit. or offer some advice?

    Thanks!
    Mary
    Last edited by reachm; April 12th, 2010 at 11:51 PM.


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    old man

    reworked painting. any critiques would be appreciated. thanks

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    You are focusing on details and not on underlying structure copying not understanding what you are drawing. The hand is stiff and flat and the hair unrealistic. I would work on structure and basic forms before tackling more portraits.

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    dpaint.....thanks
    You are absolutely right.....especially about the hand and hair ...
    I'll look at some reference and try again

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