Hack away with the critiques fellow artists, I'd love to know how can I improve on this?
What qualities can I further add to make this style of mine pop?

Something is indeed missing, but I can't really place my finger on it, too stiff maybe?

Lend Me Your Eyes!

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Lend Me Your Eyes!
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