hehehe trying to do better!!
second - don't take that personal and I don't want to be harsh with you-just look around this site read the rules choose the right section in which you will upload your work - I recommend sketchbook section because I can't see anything in these two pictures that fit in entertainment design & concept art section of the forum.
some critiques - the teeth and the hair are flat, you made the skin to look too glossy and too soft this deviant art signature only ruin the image - this is a public forum for sharing art with the world no one will try to steal your work!
ho of course, no problem men!!thanks for the warning and the reviews!