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    Cow A beautiful woman in the picture

    Hello everybody,my name is hefeifei ,25 years old this year,has been painting a very loving,This is my first post,We hope you can teach.
    A beautiful woman in the picture
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    Why does no one reply

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    Exactly what do you want the world to reply *to*?

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    Quote Originally Posted by modi123 View Post
    Exactly what do you want the world to reply *to*?

    =。=!!!At least say something random

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    Awesome picture

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    Looking good! very nice rendering.

    My only suggestions would be to check whether all the features/shapes line up in perspective. More precisely the shape and placement of the nostrils doesn't look entirely symmetrical and the mouth feels like it's on a tilt where one side is slightly higher than the other. For the nose itself maybe check the anatomy of the nose and how the different cartilages fit together?

    Given the way you have rendered her face it feels like she has a slight under bite because you've used a fairly dark shadow below the bottom lip and a less bright value above the top lip, which makes it feel like the maxilla isn't protruding as much as it does many people.

    A couple pictures to help show what I mean:
    A beautiful woman in the picture
    A beautiful woman in the picture

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    wow, I like it!
    I like the smooth lines, it's makin it more tender. I think the woman is beautiful, but ou have accelerated it by the techique. I imagine the same face with other teqnique wouldn't be the same and won't have the same warmth.
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    If you think my idea is original, suport the real art here! Thank you!

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    Really very preety women

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    Red face very grateful to your advice

    Quote Originally Posted by Tb0ne View Post
    Looking good! very nice rendering.

    My only suggestions would be to check whether all the features/shapes line up in perspective. More precisely the shape and placement of the nostrils doesn't look entirely symmetrical and the mouth feels like it's on a tilt where one side is slightly higher than the other. For the nose itself maybe check the anatomy of the nose and how the different cartilages fit together?

    Given the way you have rendered her face it feels like she has a slight under bite because you've used a fairly dark shadow below the bottom lip and a less bright value above the top lip, which makes it feel like the maxilla isn't protruding as much as it does many people.

    A couple pictures to help show what I mean:
    A beautiful woman in the picture
    A beautiful woman in the picture
    Very, very grateful to your advice, as well as your picture, because my English is not very good ,although do not understand all you said but basically understand. I will be more careful study perspective and structure. Please excuse my English is not very good Oh

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    Nice post!Awesome picture.

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    Are you 中國人?

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    Quote Originally Posted by eKye View Post
    Are you 中國人?
    。。。yes~I am,eKye也是?同胞?老乡?

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    something random

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    very nice rendering no doubt. few anatomical missing s......

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    be sure to look at your ration of features.. eyes, nose lips etc..
    your eyes of right now is too large. your distance of the nose bridge it too short.
    your pupils are too large..

    color,

    too much the same colors try complements.. you need to vary your colors more not just the same families of color at different tones.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fefe菲菲 View Post
    。。。yes~i am,ekye也是?同胞?老乡?
    同胞!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by FEFE菲菲 View Post
    。。。yes~I am,eKye也是?同胞?老乡?
    Xixi~!~
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    我英語不咋好,,好久沒來了..怎麼沒有新作品放上來呢?
    加油啊...
    My English is not good enough...Have not been here a long time......How it did not publish new works???Come on!
                                              Kye ,I'm

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    哈咯,画的挺好看,美女惹人爱啊

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    哈咯,画的挺好看,美女惹人爱啊

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