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    Finished - but crits appreciated

    i always wanted to try making an photo or similar, and this is what it turned out to be, and im doing one or two more so any crits on how to imrove the photo part is appreciated, or nay other crit as well
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    I would rather have seen more interactions between the characters here. If these are three comrades getting a potrait done, they would probably be closer and warmer to one another. Arms around shoulders, laughing, leaning into one another etc. Right now they are each posed individually in a sort of standoff.
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