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    Critque..?

    Critque..?


    Well.. what do you guys think?
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    Umm, as of right now, it's a little difficult to get a feel for what's going on, so it's a bit difficult to just critique off the cuff. It would also be helpful if you had something in particular you'd like help with. The only thing I can say right now is that the composition feels a little centered; with the direction of the line of action through her body, I'd suggest moving her closer to the bottom left corner.
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    I'm trying to make the compotsion kind of point to the kistune....

    Thanks! Will do, thanks for the quick critique.

    I'll fix it up .

    edit: the main theme is that it's sort of an oracle kistune, having a premotion.
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    There's nothing to critique yet.
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