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    Very kool sketchbook!Really enjoy your mech suit designs and stuff. Keep it up
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    wow great work, love the colors and painting! keep it up!
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    A few iterations of the middle armor in the last painting. Bottom left right candidate was used.

    I label it as "argus" for now. Sorry for horrible scan quality.
    Last edited by Tabnir; September 6th, 2010 at 09:09 PM. Reason: dyslexic, can't tell left from right or something stupid
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    nice start ))
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    Hey thank you for your comment on my sketchbook, I created a new sketchbook just recently and I wanted to invite everyone who has just commented on my "now" old sketchbook to my new one it is here -
    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=184317

    For your work, I like the latest sketches but they seem to all be facing basically the same way, maybe work on that, unless you meant to do that. Otherwise post more work dude!!! You have good stuff!
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    Good start, well balanced and inspired subject matter. Keep at it, I'd like to see how you improve in time.
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    I want your lighting and atmosphere, Tabnir. I want them!
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    I definitely love what I see here, especially that suit design in that winter '09 piece.
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    Tabnir's Sketchbook: Help me get better!
    The painted "maw" of the helmet is a homage to MP Evas, and the head knife is a nod to both Robot Unicorn Attack [YES!] and Gundam Unicorn. The large claw on the back can be bound to one of the arms; since it can swing around and change sides as necessary, it also functions as a 'tail' of sorts to assist balance.

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    Excellent start!

    The only thing I would recommend is, be careful with your space armor. The "ERC-3" for example, looks awkward. Almost like it is a child's suit? Consider the form beneath before creating the armor.
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    Wow. I l o v e your concepts and designs. The glowing effect on the girls pants in that last pic looks great. You have a really good way of handling the lighting. Can't wait to seem more so keep posting!

    To add to the space armor comment, I find that some of your torsos aren't reading very well, especially in your summer 09 one. I can't tell what his pose is easily. Maybe adding some higher contrast detailing, or just simplifying the gear in that area would help?
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    awesome sketchbook so far, can't wait to see more. Your concepts are great, maybe work on proportions a little more, a few pieces look a little off proportionally.
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    Hi Tabnir,
    cool stuffs. just loved it
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