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    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    Soooo guys ^^

    In the last month, I was only the still guest here... and today it's time to
    start a thread with my crap art.
    I must learn so much and I hope, you give me powerful critique... I need
    critique, pleeeaaaaassseeeeeee....

    Some informations about my person:
    I'm 19 years old, come from Germany Leipzig and I paint since december 2007 and yeah, I love it. Before I do some webdesign shit *lol*.

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    Here some actuel stuff from me:


    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03
    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03
    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03
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    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03
    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03


    And from today, mister master chief with a big armor update
    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03



    all the best

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    Ah you did it! welcome to ca
    Really liking the still lifes, especially the lighter looks great.
    As for the robot image, i think a more dramatic perspective would work better. Also the poses look a little static, you could push the image a lot with some more dynamic movement and a more interesting camera angle.
    Keep posting, looking forward for more!

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    thanks for your feedback :-)
    Of course, my robots are not really dynamic, you say the right my old friend ^^
    So, but I want to learn it, to do it better in my next paintings :-)


    some stuff:

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    sketch for the EOW:
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    next update, I want to upload my pencil stuff ^^

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    Soooo, little update ^^

    from today:

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03


    fuck pencil stuff:

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    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    My first Human studie stuff >.< *hate*

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03


    WIP for the EOW "opium den":

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    And a old WIP ^^

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

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    WOW! your Color and the light is so cooool I very like it..and nice to meet you~

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    I really like your still life stuff, quite believable.

    If you wanna improve your faces then look at some books from Loomis or Hogarth. They are quite good with explaining proportion/detail.

    btw in one of your paintings with the Giant open mouthed worm thingy, the ground has quite the detail to it. Can ya tell me how you did that? Was it brushes or hand painted?

    My observational skills may be great but i said nothing about my drawing skills


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    JIEZHOU: Thanks a lot :-) nice to hear that form you

    My57: thanks for your book tips :-)
    I use for the ground a stone texture with overlay in photoshop, after that I
    do some color and contrast correction and paint over with rounbrush and texture brushes to fix some details and areas I don't like ^^


    So, that's some stuff from the last days:
    I don't know what's going on with me, my stuff sucks all the time since the
    last days... I compare me to much with other good artists >.<
    So, you see it on my work, it's really the bad way...


    first portrait painting:
    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03


    Speedpaints:

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03


    and here the finished EOW:

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    I was not really constructive last days >.< *fuck*

    ZuluSplitter learn to paint and draw - need a lot of critique - update 29.03

    and some other thinks...

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