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March 9th, 2010 #1
I'm looking to get feedback on a current, untitled work in progress.
I'm using Photoshop.
Thanks for any help.
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I would suggest working on the lighting more. She is too lit up for that shadow to be so dynamic. Otherwise the composition could use help. Im not sure what I am looking at. Maybe it means something but Im not getting a good sense of it. Try to think about "What else can I do to enhance the intention of the image." that may require you to figure out what your intention is. If your intention is to just draw a sexy girl then you have already accomplished that. But realize that sexy girls are kinda boring without premise. The story can really enhance your image.
March 31st, 2010 #3
April 1st, 2010 #4
July 14th, 2011 #5
I would like to clutter the blank spaces in this piece with more random graffiti but I would like to get some opinions first. Do you guys think it's better to keep it as simple and clean as it is now, or should I fill it up?
Thanks for your time!
July 14th, 2011 #6
i would recommend taking out the florescent outline from here hair and leaving it more natural like you second post. Also i would do the same for the right side of your image, making the back ground more like the second post. I would not recommend changing anything on the current graffiti but i would recommend toning down her reflected light on the right side of the image and see how that looks.
July 15th, 2011 #7
I personally would leave that graffiti and stuff out because I felt my eye was really focussed on her face in your #3 post, and now I'm not sure where to look first.
There are probably ways to enhance your image, but can't help you there sorry!
July 16th, 2011 #8
Oooh ouch - I'd get rid of the graffiti and pink hair outline myself.
I know this is probably a cheesecake shot but now the picture is practically screaming incoherently with all the random bright colors.
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roll back roll back!!! The second pic was great... The neon colors and outline are a bit.. ick.
July 18th, 2011 #10
So, I'm not going to lie, I wasn't expecting the backlash against the new direction of the image but I do respect the criticism.
I've taken a step back; or, maybe forward?