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    Red face [fan art] Monster Hunter

    Fan Art Monster Hunter
    I just have got PSP only 2 months, I have played many game
    such as DJ-mac, Patapon, and Monster Hunter.
    I love this game so much so I drew it .

    Thank you for comment.
    [fan art] Monster Hunter
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    Is this your own design? If it is, its not bad. It looks like the whole thing would benefit from being a line work piece especially since most manga is anyway. Your shapes are not separating. You can try to paint them out better or add lines to distinguish everything.

    You also have no darks. The mist at the bottom is contributing to that too. Maybe just an adjustment layer of contrast would fix it. Remember to bring the forefront character out more than the background guy. He should recede.

    You have countless bad tangents and confusing shapes so keep that in mind in the future. All those shapes overlapping need to be carefully considered.

    But good job tho it looks good for fanart
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    thank you ^w^
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