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February 26th, 2010 #1
Looking for critiques :)
Hey guys, just finished this painting. I tried to speed paint and this is what came out.
As always shred it apart and tell me anything. I love feedback... and I want to get better.
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February 26th, 2010 #3
Nice idea but it's flat and boring right now. Composition is interesting in that the falls relate to the buildings but it is all so dead-on that it is very flat and not interesting to look at. There is no sense of light - just this vague, ambient nothingness. If you want to push it, recompose it, get some ref for waterfalls/trees, develop a sense of light and give it the effort it deserves.
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February 26th, 2010 #4
Thanks guy for your opinions, and yes Spiral I was very pleased with the trees.
Jeff I must say I love reading everything you have to say, always helps me look at it from another point of view. I see now what you mean theres like no light source. I will see if I cannot try and fix that.
So thanks again..