work a little more on the bodies in the illustration some body parts look kind of small or lopsided the leg muscles do look a little more on the left side on the hybrid human good luck to ya
Everything is permitted
Thanks so much for the crits
And a sketch from today
Im doing some oldwest character for fun.
This is a wip
shit from imagination
Commission i did a while ago
Thanks n1frit. Try to post more
Very cool work in here! I love your anatomy studies and your work is already pro-looking!
Eager to see more, keep pushing!
I'll be here with the Daggers for the rest of my art journey.
Keep pushing people, let us be great together-!
Thanks so much kikindaface and smrrfette. I cant post work right now but i try yo upload some studies. Thanks guys
Thanks Leaderofzombies. I agree, a little more contrast would work better
zombies everywhere. just a sketch
Thanks Icecold. More sketches soon
Your latest sketch tells a cool story but I think you could have gone for a better composition.
Also, the poses of the characters lack a sort of action feeling, there's no sense of real motion. The girl has a couple of slightly misplaced anatomy-parts, mainly in the chest area, like the colar bones, the neck, tits and features in the face are just a tad misplace (she's also very muscular).
Just my humble 2 cents, nice sketchbook overall
nice figure and gestures studies very 3d ,I think though your drawing would be vastly improved if you would have practiced more line weight-variate thickness ,use soft brushes when blocking in.
accentuate overlapping forms and your drawing will look a lot better.
Thanks so much for the comments guys.
Grafguy: completely agree with you. Im just trying to improve, so after i finish the sketch i realize a lot of things that i could do better and sometimes i dont know how to improve the sketch
GrayPersona: thanks man. Overlapping is a thing that i always forget
So, a rough sketch. I´ll detail it later
wow this i love your sketchbook man, i especially love how strong those oldwest characters are.
dessinateurimpulsif: thanks man!
Yemi775: thank you. I have some more and i want to do a lot more. Lets see if i find time for this
And now a personal piece. I tried to imagine a story behind. So, the knight is almost dead and a nymph finds him. Maybe she can save him but there is something coming up.
Sketching an idea
Inspired by the book On the road
Last edited by Luk999; March 26th, 2013 at 10:55 AM.
Very nice elephant! I love how way too long he is!
Your colors are excellent.
You could work on anatomy though blahblahblah.... who couldn't...
It is actually pretty good though.
Keep up the good work blah blah blah!
Commission i just finished.
quick environment study
Posting some stuff again.
Some studies using ref and some sketches from imagination
Last edited by Luk999; May 20th, 2013 at 05:17 PM.
Some gestures from imagination and some using ref