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    General critiques needed!

    Hey all! Got a few images i've been hoping to finish up with here soon, but i'd like some feedback on them before i go anywhere. These are all sort of experiments for me, being a bit outside my normal style. Thank you all so much in advance! I really appreciate this site and all the friendly, informative users that take the time to critique my humble works.

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    Well you definatelly need to use reference when doing these. You have a lot of thick lines, seems like you didn't even use pen tablet even though u probably did. Learn how to blend the colors to smooth things out. Maybe you can find some good tutorials on here: http://conceptartmasters.blogspot.com/

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    The top forest background is interesting. The green feels a bit straight out of the tube. If you walk into a field or forest, there's tons of decaying leaves and various tones in the trees.

    The background feels a bit flat because I only see three trees.

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    The most general critique for these I can think of: go to fineart.sk, get "Creative Illustration" by Loomis there, and read it. Then exercise.

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