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    Homayun's Sketchbook

    hi every body,after a long time finally i decided to start my sketchbook
    i wanna show my progress to you guys,and i hope u'll tell me my mistakes!!!
    ok,here i go:
    i did it yesterday;for my human anatomy trinings:
    please tell me my mistakes.thanks!
    i have a qustion!HELP MY.Plz
    1.what should i do to have a real shadows?as u see,my shadows are not good and i coulden't found good way for fix them,do have any tutorial or method for make real shadow?!

    after all,be honest,is it good for me?i have 16 years old and started to learn(selftought)from last summer!

    sorry for my bad english and Have a good day!

    Last edited by Homayun; June 14th, 2010 at 03:29 AM.
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    other stuff: (it's older than first pic)

    higher quality:
    http://www.img98.com/images/6lfozmulf0clvv8we.jpg

    Feel free for posting,plz

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    update after a long time:d

    feel free for posting
    bye

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    quick sketch(5 or 10min)just for fun:

    no idea?:d

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    something new:


    no commant?:d

    Last edited by Homayun; March 26th, 2010 at 05:30 AM.
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    hey pal keep on working. i like the prisoner. you could make a study and show him in different positions and actions. good luck

    "It's a time machine, Napoleon. We bought it online."

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    hey man,thanks for ur post,it suprised me:d
    i hope i'll can improve my drawing skill in this summer!:d
    i did it last night,i hope u like it:

    i think something in her eyes make it unreal but i cant find it,can u help me??

    thanks and have a good time:d

    Last edited by Homayun; June 16th, 2010 at 02:44 AM.
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    nice hatching style you did on your piece,
    keep practicing, I think it's good for you try to do some life drawing

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    thanks aldo
    something diffrent:i did it just for fun,i hope u like it:d


    have a good time:d

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    something that i've done for teen challange91 warlord


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    I'm back:d after long time finaly yesterday I decided to start figure drawing again and learn it complatly:d
    i did it. For start,just front viwe(I can't draw another viwe,but I'll learn it:d)

    plz tell me my problems and feel free for posting
    Have good time

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    face elements little study: :d


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    Hello Homayun. First, I suggest you to upload bigger images, some of these are to small. This would be mistake number 1. As for the shadows, mistake number 2, I had the guy asking the same question, how do I make my shadows right? My suggestion is, try first by pure simple thinking and remembering. Tell where your light source is, and then think where would the shadows be. Observe real life objects and people. Observer the light source, the sun, the lamp, whatever, and observer the object shadows, their direction and volume. Post #3, it clearly shows you have difficulty with shading. The shading you did on the right side of the face is quite straight, while it should be more of a curved line, loosen. So, like I said, thinking, remembering, observation. Keep on!

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    Really dig those humorous concepts, I could tell you had a lot of fun with those. Keep it up!

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    Hey bro, You should flip your image so that they are not side ways ! Use ref photos for just about everything you do that has a person in it, This will help you make the picture look better and it will give you info about how the body works and how stuff bends and curves. Make sure that you are never just copying because then it would be pointless to really do anything lol. I think that you should start with basics before moving on to something that is way over your head and can not learn very well. I think that some Loomis and Bridgman would help you a lot, But make sure that you are doing more then that because if they are all that you do then that is only making it so you can draw their drawings instead of translating the info that they give you into other drawings, hope this helps!

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    wow!!!!many critics:d
    Cgaddict and diarum:
    thanks guys!hey diarum,do u have any refrence image site?I realy need it!
    Nenad:
    is it helpful that I start again from first with draw simple things?which book is good for start from first?

    Hey guys thanks a lot

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    here you go bro
    This should give you just about everything you need
    Males
    Female
    Outdoors
    Robotics
    Man-made

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    Tnx diarum:d what do think?should I start From first again?

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    lol I am not sure what you mean

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    Just start again and try to draw things work on lighting and etc and after that start drawing figures portraits and...I mean work on basics:d

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    Yea dude, you should start with the basics and draw from life these are like the most important things you can do! If you need any direction or something I'll try and help you the best I can!

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    Tnx dude,I need book,something good for start,can u help me?

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    Andrew Loomis
    George Bridgman
    These should give you just about ever book you need for the time being!
    Also have a look at Hundreds of ebooks Look here for which loomis and bridgman books you should get

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    Hey dude I downloaded loomsi books,where should I start?with which loomis book?:d
    tnx for evrything:d

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    Not sure dude, I think it really just up to you to find out which on fits you the best for now

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    I start to read fun with pencil,is it right?!
    I'll show u my daily progress,I hope it'll start tomarrow:d

    have a good time my friends

    Last edited by Homayun; July 2nd, 2010 at 05:47 PM.
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    ok,here we go:d
    work on lights!


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    Hi all,after a long time :d
    Just draw something with my ipod for fun(but i think it's my best work till now!)
    Evrything done with ipod touch(smoke effect and texts added with photoshop)
    I hope u like it



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    hi all

    i found this comic inking on internet then try to colored it for coloring practice!

    inking work:



    colored one:



    special thanks for artist who drew it!:d

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