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    WIP - Composition help, please!

    I wasn't sure about the category of the image. I probably got it wrong. D:

    I'm trying to determine the composition and the light source. There will eventually be some pattern details on the fabric wrapping her body. I'm not happy with the vertical line formed by the blue highlights on her right arm, but other than that, I think this is going where I want it to.

    Right now, the main thing I want is making sure the composition is working, but anything else you see, please feel free to point it out!
    Last edited by keiiii; February 4th, 2010 at 03:36 AM. Reason: arrrg
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    THe two colors of light divide the picture in half diagonally probably not what yo uwant as it tends to make thecomposition static. The light source on the right should create shadow forms on the face and hair everything is a little flat. The the angle of a form changes its value changes
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