if by "poop" you mean "poop your pants now!! because this is awesome", then yes i agree it is poop.
also, for a crit on that above image, w/ the girls face, i feel like she has a very masculine jaw. a bit too wide and strong in my opinion. her neck also seems kind of large for a female, she sort of looks like a female bodybuilder.
im really liking all of your work a lot, very impressive. for pointers on the portrait, her left eye(our right) doesn't seem it turns as well as the mouth does, maybe its that shadow above the eye, where the socket is. feel free to soften the cheeks up and where the right cheek meets the chin. chin looks clunky, but the nose, mouth, her right eye(our left) looks great. you could warm up her nose, and cool down everything thing below the nose, just a tad. its coming along though. yeah that right eye is off.. hope this helped, probably didnt though. again nice work.
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Hey there, that last one is pretty cool. There's a few things to critique, but I think the main thing that sticks out at me is that with the exception of the face, it looks pretty "2D" in spite of it being pretty well done. It seems like the dude is a little bit "cut out" in comparison to the background, as opposed to being a part of the scene. Try adding another layer of darker darks, or lighter lights to give it that "pop". You don't have to add anymore light sources, just deepen what you already have.
I like your pics, especially the first one. Try to finish your works more carefully, because your last zombie is detailed for different areas.
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Cool works you've got in here. In the female portrait, I think the most important issue is that the cranium is too small, or the lower face/jaw too big. Try solving this scale issue and it'll end up looking much more "normal". Unless, of course, that you were aiming for a giantess/masculine look.
The finished zombie piece is awesome, maybe the neck/shoulders/back area could be anatomically more accurate, but the rendering is really sweet.
Keep up the work!
Really nice work I can see.
The zombie was way too cool. Really nice works here. Now I'm really pumped up to practice.
Great SB, you have some really great designs and imaginative work. I particularly like the Alien in your first post and the Pig Warrior creature, which looks both cute and menacing.
Double Thumbs Up!
Your rendering skills are really strong. How ddi you get to be so good at it?
Oh yeah! love those zombies. Great job.
Good work, keep drawing and keep posting!
post #33 is very good! great rendering.