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    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    after lurking for a bit on people here and in the forum in general i decided to finally open a sketchbook

    a little about myself I'm 19 years old, right now I'm studying for a P.E degree in mechanic engineering, I've been drawing since like 4th grade but been seriously putting myself in it for the past half a year or so and I aspire to become a better artist and to try my best to get in to the industry which is why I came here, in order to get as best as I can
    and that's pretty much it


    some of my finished work from the last few months

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    my most recent one from a couple of days ago

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    and some W.I.P's

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    hopefully i will update it every week or two

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    I love your subject matter ( if that's wat it's called)
    The subjects you draw?... what your characters are doing and the style; very dreamy and fantasy.

    I think you need to clean your lines more. Right now, some of them look a bit muddy... the first one doesn't look muddy at all though. I really liek that one ^^

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    Very good so far, you have an excellent knack for detail. Your anatomy on some of the more complete characters is very well done. Keep up the good work!

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    hey dude, i see some great potential here, tell us more about yourself, how old are you ? what are you studying ? keep up the good work and post some more.

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    @chelli - thanks for the comment and the tip I'll keep in mind about the lines and muddy look

    @Icedearth15876 - thank you and will do

    @giordan - a little about myself I'm 19 years old, right now I'm studying for a P.E degree in mechanic engeniring, I've been drawing since like 4th grade but been seriously putting myself in it for the past half a year or so and I aspire to become a better artist I try my best to get in to the industry which is why I came here, in order to get as best as I can
    and that's pretty much it

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    where in Israel are you from man?
    More updates and your values/saturation need work - stil lifes help.

    Send me a PM we should organize something local

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    Your paintings are looking good! Id love to seem some concepts as in line drawings! Or do you use the painting process as a concept drawing as well? Keep up the good work!

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    @vatsel - i've sent you the pm

    @shambok - thanks man you bet i'll keep up the work


    here are some sketches most of them are from photos and some are from imagination

    oren's sketchbook April 14th
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    some amphibians

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    and some fishies

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    and a painting from a photo

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    thanks for the support guys

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    Great pictures my friend))

    mechanical engineering?)
    coool.
    i`ve graduated as Aerospace Engineer myself,
    great to see other engineers drawing)

    keep them coming and you will progress for sure!))

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    @Jama - never thought you're an aero space engineer, no wonder you have an amazing eye for technical and mechanical painting you truly are an amazing person Jama
    thanks for the encouragment

    well here are a couple of studies from photos i did today and yesterday the first took about 2~2.5 hours and the second was 1~1.5 hours

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    oren's sketchbook April 14th

    and here's a thunderdome challenge i began but unfortunatly didn't finish during the 60 min limit because the battery of my laptop ranout but i decided to finish it anyway

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    Cool studies))

    you are quite good with colour,
    the only thing i would advice to you is to study anatomical issues!)

    let the force be with you!

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    @jama - thanks for the comment i'll definitly work on the antomy issues i have like the pros always say practice! practice! practice!

    a small update of a w.i.p of a stillife i'm working on

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    Keep at it broo

    watch the proportions on the photo ref studies
    and I would advise against a lava lamp on the still life because its won't keep still haha

    More more more - pump those art muscles!

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    Off to a good start! I can't really give crits on colour. Your line drawings would read better if there was more line width variation, use broken lines more and use changes in line thickness and consistency to show overlaps and change in value. If you have two objects of similar value overlapping, the line you draw to separate them should look "weak", save the heavy lines for deep creases, and sharp changes from light to shadow. I like the imagination stuff, looks like you already have good control of photoshop!

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    @vatsel - yeah it's easy to lose the proportions when you paint from a photo but i'll do my best to not lose them next time

    @manmadegod - thanks for the advices on the lines part i'll take it into account in the future and i'm using paint tool sai not photoshop

    well here are three creatures i did in a couple of hours or so, so enjoy

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    just a small update

    a few birds

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    hey man the birds look cool!
    The three monsters i like a little less.. But thats fine!
    I just dont like monstors :X

    Keep up the good work man..
    Update more often!! If you ahve the time ofc!

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    cool bird studies - don't tease us, show us MOOOOOOREEEE

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    @rbeek - thanks for the comment and about the creatures saw a video about 'em and had to give a shot

    @vatsel - thanks i'll tease you all i want haha.

    well guys having a bit of a hard time lately cause of final exams had a couple of them this last week each was 4 hours long, wasn't easy but i made it through somehow.
    but right now i have a few days off before the next couple of exams.
    right now i'm doing a couple of paintings on canvas but they're not finished yet so you'll see them in the next few days but i did some studies today and a w.i.p of a stillife so enjoy

    the studies
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    and the stillife w.i.p

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    cheers

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    For some reason I can't view some of the images. A ? appears on the last images. Maybe it's just my computer?? Anyway I would agree that studying anatomy and doing life drawings will def help you improve.

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    Nice stuff Oren keep it up, hah I should draw some animals

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    watch the perspective on the still life

    keep workin

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    @Istmin52 - I think it might be your computer there, thanks anyway

    @Dy.laneA - thanks, and I think you should do more animals it helps to understand how mother nature did her work.

    @vatsel - I'll definitly watch my perspective on my future stillifes

    here's the final version of the stillife, you're more than welcome to crit and comment so that I can improve with my future ones

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    cheers mates

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    here's a photo study I did over the last couple of days, it's a w.i.p but I don't know if I can look at it anymore

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    wowwaaaa D I like this last one alot !
    U should work on it a little more
    especially now you have got the head done
    the colors on his snout/eyes etc and the bug look so cool!

    Keep this one up !
    Peace out !!

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    @roger - always great to read your comments and don't worry I'm sure I'll finish this one just not now, I worked on it for like 4~5 hours or more, I'll finish it over the weekend

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    Looking good!
    Regular, varied, detailed..so there's not much i can critique, i can only cheer you on to keep the pace!

    Only, perhaps a few more detailed figure studies, or muscle studies..so bridgman maby?

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    Hey there oren, glad for the comment at my sb so i decided to return the favor yehh, lookin good! The photo studies and still-lifes are coming along nicely, thought you should pay more attention to the edges, they all seem very soft now, lacking all the hard ones. Also more highlights there and there would bring them up more alive! keep it on!

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    photo study is lookin gewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd

    keep up

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