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    Tree Sloth - WIP C&C please!

    Hey all, its been a while since I posted here!

    Heres my current WIP. Im still far from done with this guy and will probably end up using hair fx in the final render as appose to sculpted in hair, perhaps a paint over (if i can get good at it )
    Id like some C&C on the comp and especially the pose. The hanging arm feels a bit stiff and awkward in my opinion but Im not sure what to do with it. I like the idea of the hanging arm because it ties in his head turning at bit better.
    Thanks in advance!

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    Rule of thirds. Shift the character and trees to the left, and hang his arm vertically along the line of the first vertical third.

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    thanks for the suggestion, ill have to give that a shot!

    "From here to the ears and eyes of the 'verse!"
    "There are three basic types, Mr. Pizer, the wills, the won'ts, and the can'ts. The wills accomplish everything, the won'ts oppose everything, and the can'ts won't try anything." - Vincent; The Black Hole
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